I’ve finally finished packing! Since I have some time to relax, I thought I should post a short teaser to the plot I posted Here. Let me know if I should continue or not. The Twilight stuff isn’t accurate, not that you care or anything. It’s awful, I’m sorry.
Edit: I absolutely hated the ending, so I changed it to something that made sense. I’m satisfied now. Also, they’re all High School aged[14-18]. Whether or not they’ll attend a High School is still being decided. Yeah, I forgot to mention that earlier.
Love Bites- Teaser: What’s Up With Teen Romances?
1st Person, Artemis POV.
Zombies. Out of the thousands of other things we could’ve been facing, we had zombies and we were surrounded.
“Hm, There are four of us and roughly twenty of them. We are in trouble.” Athena said.
“Thanks for pointing out the obvious, goddess of wisdom.” Hecate snapped in a sarcastic tone.
The next time I see Eros, I’m going to kill him.
Time Change: A few days earlier.
I’ve never understood Teen Romances. This one was about a depressed girl having to choose between a sparkly boy and another boy who’s always shirtless. I had no clue why I was being forced to watch this.
“The werewolf boy has ripped his shirt off again,” Athena announced, “That’s five times in the last ten minutes.”
The shirtless guy was a werewolf? Lycan has a lot more hair than he does.
“Ahh,” Aphrodite squealed, “He’s so shirtless!”
Hecate tried to get up and leave, but Aphrodite shoved her back in her chair.
“I don’t understand this,” Hestia said quietly.
The depressed girl and the sparkly boy leaned in for a kiss. “Eww,” I moaned, “Gross.”
Aphrodite gasped, “I have an idea,” She said, “Since none of you understand this movie how about I-”
‘Let you go’, Please say ‘let you go’.
“Fix you hair,” she continued, “There’s a certain goddess I know that has awful helmet hair…”
She continued to tell everyone their hair flaws, each followed by a five minute rant.
“…And that’s why you shouldn’t dye your hair purple, Hecate.” Aphrodite finished.
Hecate looked offended. She summoned a sharp object and lunged at the love goddess.
Athena pulled her back. “I know she frustrates you, but you can’t hurt her,” She said, “We are not allowed to get blood on the marble floors.”
“Oh, So I can get her in the courtyard?” Hecate asked.
“Aphrodite, Don’t you have to help Eros prepare for Valentine’s Day?” Hestia asked, trying to change the subject. Either she didn’t want a fight to break out, or she wanted to escape Aphrodite as badly as the rest of us.
“I do!” Aphrodite exclaimed, running toward the door, “Thank you for reminding me, Hestia.”
I looked at the other three girls, “Run,” I said.
July 15, 2012 at 10:48 AM
That was a very great teaser!
Amazing post!
-P
July 15, 2012 at 1:17 PM
Thanks, glad you liked it.
July 16, 2012 at 12:24 PM
OMR!! The title is extremely clever! 8D
I liked it very much! Surprisingly, Aphrodite seems to be my favorite character so far. She’s hilarious!
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July 16, 2012 at 6:02 PM
Thanks. I heard this song on the Radio with the same title, and it hit me.
Really? I really hope I’m portraying her right. I don’t want her to be incredibly ditsy/stupid. I mean, she made some serious stuff go down in the Myths.
July 16, 2012 at 7:57 PM
I like it! So excited! Hands down to Hecate (: Nice story title! Epix! CONTINUE PLEASE!!
July 17, 2012 at 7:34 AM
Thanks.
Hecate is the only one of the 4 crazy enough to dye her hair purple.
July 17, 2012 at 7:46 AM
Love bites… but so do I… so do I….
Cool teaser!
Makes me can’t wait for the story!
July 17, 2012 at 8:00 AM
That’s the song that made me think of the title. :O
Thanks, I’m glad people are excited.
August 31, 2012 at 3:14 PM
…Awkward moment when I realize I got dared to dye my hair purple once~ :L
Aphrodite and I would NOT get along well! xD
August 31, 2012 at 3:38 PM
My parents would kill me of I dyed all of my hair purple. But If I were dared, I’d be like ‘Challenge Accepted’.
Me either. She’s just ‘trying to help’ the girls but she’s only making their lives a living nightmare.
August 31, 2012 at 4:38 PM
xD yeah lol
(ohh and don’t worry about my hair, it got back to normal in time for my mom to come home :L)